
Sensitivity Reading
Sensitivity Reading
A respectful, reader-first check on diversity and characterisation. I highlight areas that may land differently for readers and give you practical options to strengthen the work β while keeping your voice intact.
What You Get
More than a checklist. I read as a person of colour and a queer man, and I give you nuanced, compassionate feedback rooted in lived experience.
Representation Check
I assess how BIPOC, LGBTQIA+, and other marginalised characters are portrayed β looking for stereotypes, tropes, and missed nuance.
Dialogue & Voice
Does the dialogue feel authentic? I flag language that may feel off, forced, or unintentionally harmful.
Harmful Tropes
I identify common harmful tropes and stereotypes that may have slipped in unnoticed, with context on why they land badly.
In-Line Comments
Your report includes in-line comments highlighting specific passages and explaining how they could be revised for stronger representation.
Practical Alternatives
I donβt just flag problems β I offer concrete suggestions that strengthen the work while preserving your creative vision.
Detailed Report
A structured report covering all findings, organised by theme, with clear prioritisation and next steps.
My Perspective
I read as a bi-racial (Irish and Black Caribbean) gay man. My sensitivity reading focuses on:
Race & Ethnicity
Especially Black and mixed-race characters and experiences
Sexuality
LGBTQIA+ characters, relationships, and coming-out narratives
Body Image
Fair and nuanced representation of plus sized characters
Intersectionality
How multiple identities interact and shape a characterβs experience
For cultures and identities outside my own lived experience, I read as a person of colour and flag areas that feel off β while recommending you also consult a reader from that specific background.
Packages
All packages include a detailed report and in-line comments.
Basic
Short Work
Up to 10,000 words
- β Detailed report
- β In-line comments
- β 3-day delivery
Standard
Novel
Up to 50,000 words
- β Detailed report
- β In-line comments
- β 7-day delivery
- β 1 revision
Deep Dive
Long Novel
Up to 75,000 words
- β Detailed report
- β In-line comments
- β 14-day delivery
- β 1 revision
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